Tuesday 29 August 2017

Comic man questions

Why did Dylan especially like stories written by Alan Garner and Susan Cooper?they write his favourite kinds of stories.correct

What were Dylan horrock’s first words when he was a baby?Donald Duck
correct

Why did people in the 1960s and 70s frown upon comics?because they were not proper books.correct

How was role play useful to Dylan to help him with comics?it helped him imagine and think of characters and worlds.correct

Once Dylan left school what was his plan and did it work out?go to London and get work in the British comic industry. why/why not?it didn't work because he did not get to London.correct

What learning powers do you think Dylan demonstrates and why?resilience because he keeps making books even though he did not get to London.
Creativity because he had to be creative to come up with great ideas.correct

He has a lovely voice, for s start, and he’s very thoughtful and articulate. What does the word articulate mean here?that he speaks fluently.correct

What is something you have learnt after reading this?that it hard to maybe make comic and to keep trying.correct

Choose one word from the text and translate it into maori.Articulate=Pūkōrero

Thursday 24 August 2017

Weekly news:Typhoon Hato hits Hong Kong


The was the worst typhoon in japan in 5 years. Japan has a typhoon that killed 3 people and injured many. It hit macau yesterday.it has know deleted 400 flights yesterday.there still same flood and trees uprooted

i think is sad new to all the family that have lost someone.it does not mean much to me because i don't know anyone there.
I wonder what the worst typhoon to hit japan was?

info from kiwi kid news

Weekly reflection


This week I have got all my mangahigh tasks done with my best standards.
I have got most of my priorities done which are
manga high
word of the week
blog post
read theory
I am all most am tuakana this week.
I hope to be tuakana next week. 
I hope to get my first question on my ie 4 doc. 

Narrative:The anceints

One fine morning in heaven Zeus was waking up next to his lovely wife Hera,but he was woken to the sound of war,that was raining down outside his door.So he got up and look through the blinds to see Ares (the god of war),the man he had banished to hell and lucifer the one who had let him out so that he could kill his dad but Ares had not do that he had killed
Hephaestus,Dionysus,Apollo,Aether,Hesperus,Aristaeus,Asclepius,Kratos,Zelus,Morpheus,Adonis,Chronos Castor and Pollux. As the war raged on with Priapus,Hermes,Eros,Cronus,Hypnos,Helios,Atlas,
Plutus,Priapus,Pluto,Momus And Anemoi still fight each other. zeus shouted “STOP!!”Then they all paused as
Zeus Asked “Why are you fighting?” but all of a sudden Ares slit pluto throat and
shouted “May wars rain on!” So they continued to fight under ares spell but there was nowhere to move,because of all the dead bodies so they all shot do to earth with Ares.

So zeus shot down there to find half of a village destroyed already.Lots more gods dead so he walked up to ares grab him by the neck and so Ares stabbed him with a pic of wood he had grabbed,then zeus ripped out of him and as the ichor(god blood)poured out he put it in Ares’s leg and more ichor started pouring out.Then he dropped ares and looked behind him to find his son Prometheus(half god,half man) there,So he walk up to him and asked Him “Where is your mother?”
he replied “In a the hut that is on fire.”with a sob,
So zeus ran into the hut and smashed a wall to get to her to find she had been murdered in her sleep.so he screamed  and then one by he ask who killed her and if they did not answer he snapped their necks because he thought they might know how killed his girlfriend(not sure if this is right) in her sleep. He walked up to ares grabbed he thought him to heaven,then grabbed Lucifer and through him to hell.

zeus flew to heaven grabbed ares flew to the top of mount olympus and dropped him down the stairs so as his head hit the steps one by one then snapped his neck and through his body to hell.war had stopped when ares died the most painful dead back on earth eir(the god of healing) had started to heal all the people zeus and the god had killed but one soul could not be save prometheus's mum but peace was resorted again.

Persuasive writing

Reasons why computers are necessary in school
I believe that computers are necessary in school.but why do you  believe computer are necessary in school ?Or don’t you think computers are necessary?

If computer were in school they would make way easier to write  a story and you don’t have to be good at spelling. A lot of people these day are not very good at handwriting so this would help write a story netley. I you spell something wrong it underline it with red. “Kristin Wong saysPlus, most of us are faster typers than writers, so journaling by hand might take a bit more time and effort.

You can use google to do research for anything like IES, a report .google has so many thing on it you could find any information you need.google is not the only search site so if you can't find what you need on google there other sites to research on. “Hugh Ashman says” The ease with which you can write and revise, having typing and spelling mistakes corrected as you go…”

I would help people  to read and write. People with disabilities can listen to the computer instead of the teacher read then the story or something. You can to write which is where you talk and the  computer writes it do for you.“Says richard wanderman,”I'm a successful adult with a learning disability (dyslexia); part of the reason for my success is that I use computers to organize and express my ideas.

In conclusion I believe this is why computers are necessary in school. And these are my reasons why because it makes it easier to write,you can research things and it helps people with a disabilities.

Highwayman language features



Definition
Example from the poem
How effective do you think it was? Did you like it?
Simile
Saying that one thing is similar to another e.g. My fingers are like ice.
Dumb as a dog he listened,
Yes because i know how dumb he is
Metaphor
Saying that one thing is another e.g. My fingers are ice.
The wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees,
Yes because I  know what It sort of looks like.
Alliteration
Starting a series of words with the same consonant sound e.g. A big black boulder.
Over the cobbles he clattered and clashed in the dark inn-yard,
Yes because i sort of know  but not because i did not understand it at first
Repetition
Repeating the same words or phrases a few times to make an idea clearer.
How Bess, the landlord's daughter,
The landlord's black-eyed daughter,
No because it is just repeating the same words
Symbolism
The use of one object or action (a symbol) to represent or suggest something else.
red=love fo the highwayman and bess/blood or death
No because i did not understand it

Sunday 20 August 2017

IE questioning


Questions to consider (individually)  Share as  blog post once this has been completed.
What is it I hope I will come to understand more deeply through this inquiry?
Why they sacrificed people to gods that may or may not exist,who was this ancient civalavashin


What knowledge might I need to help move towards this understanding?
How to skim and scan text,drawing,resilience,

What is it I hope to be able to do more competently?   What skills will I need to learn (skills)
Skimming and scanning,reading,art.


What learning powers will this inquiry help me practice and develop further?  (Explain this)
Resilience because i have to read a lot of writing,curiosity because you have to be curious to learn

Thursday 10 August 2017

Have your say for highwayman


Have your say


The following questions are aimed to make you think...There are no right answers as long as you give reasons for what you have written…. Make a copy and go for it!

  1. Do you think the choice Bess makes (to warn the Highwayman by taking her own life) Is stupid or inspiring? I think it is stupid because she knew him for like 3 minutes.
  2. If you made a movie of this, who would you cast as the highwayman? How about Bess?  I would role Leonardo DiCaprio for highwayman and for Bess I would role Abby Sciuto.      
  3. Have you ever admired a criminal? Do you think it's OK to make robbers into heroes?no because they have done bad already and should go to prison.
  4. Why do you think people tell ghost stories? Is the ghost story in this poem meant to make us scared? Happy? Sad?sad because two people have died but i would not crying they both deserved it couse they.
How do you feel about tragic stories? Would you switch this ending for a happy one if you could?no because the would ruin the story.

Highwayman wanted poster


Wednesday 9 August 2017

10 Reasons why comtputers are great

10 reasons why computers are great

1:Coding,Coding is fun because you can make a game that people will love to play.
2:Games,Gaming is cool because it's a great time waster and you can make millions in the big league.
3:Music,Music is fun to listen to and you don’t have to have the cd.
4:Work,If you have a job you can tip all your work instead of writing super on a pic of paper .
5:Email,if you were 20 to 30 year you had to write letter these day can write a email in 5 minutes and get to them in 2 minutes.
6:Social media,social is good because wal you can talk half around the world and you don’t have pay to talk to then.
7:Internet,you can access anything for research.
8:Youtube,you watch videos to know how to do something.
9:Writing,it is so easy to write a story because you don’t need to know how to spell.

10:News,you don’t have to watch the news you can just read it on the site.